Monday, September 27, 2010

my weekend

My weekend was ok. All I did was chill  play my xbox360 and sleep. I did'nt really feel  like doing alot. I played the game Holo reach and the godfather n grand theft auto. I was in the house all weekend and I was chillin n my room all day. I did'nt want to go outside cuz i get in trouble every time. I watched TV all day too. I was watching the football game too. It was a really good game. I had a good weekend.
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  1. UnknownSeptember 27, 2010 at 10:19 AM

    Stephon- Nice job capitalizing the first letter of every sentence.

    Instead of using cuz, write the word because. Also, instead of using the letter 'n,' use the word AND. Like you said, when we use text messaging, it may be ok to write this way. However, when we are writing formally, we need to follow the rules of grammar.

    1-Thought (-)
    1-Sentence (+)
    1-Punctuation (+)
    1-Capitalization (+)

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  2. JahlilOctober 12, 2010 at 6:28 AM

    Stephon,

    You did not write everything. You need to write about what you learned about your comic strip. Make sure you complete all of your work. Don't let your grades get lower. Keep working hard Stephon.

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