The assembly was cool. Then two other Africans came out and danced. Then they left and came back but they wasn't on stage. He was dancing down the hall. Then he started talking and asked the students to dance with him.
The students got up and danced on stage. the student got off stage. then the Africans brought up the teachers to dance. They didn't want to go on stage. My teacher the principal my English teacher and all the other teachers went on stage. It was a fun assembly.
The assembly was cool. Then an other African came out and danced. The man was on stilts dancing. Then at the and they all was dancing and they bowled. It was a good show.
To Stephon: From Deshaun: Wonderful work! you need to correct your work and put comas in there. good job!
Stephon,
ReplyDeleteYour blog is wonderful. You make some wonderful observations in this essay! Remember to pay CLOSE attention to the notes I write on your drafts. I noted a few errors that were not fixed in this final draft. I have seen a lot of improvement in your writing. Keep up the great hard work!
Total Grade: A $4.00