On comic life we were making a comic. I also showed them how to take their picture. I to break down what I was talking about so they could understand what i was talking about. Nine kids came to our class. We made a great comic.
I had to break it down because they couldn't understand. The kid that I was teaching had putted some picture of trains on it. Then I went downstairs to get lunch. Then we all eat lunch.
Quadir was a good kid. He looked like he didn't want to do anything. Then he started doing a lot. He didn't understand what I was talking about so i told him in a different way. I had a good time.
Then we sent are comics. The kids were crying because they didn't want to go. Then we took a group picture in the hallway. They was vary good kids. I went back to class and cleaned up.
From Deshaun Cole To Stephon Mccoy. Stephon good job on your paragraph. But there are a few errors, you spelled launch and it was supposed to be lunch, Quadir is also supposed to be capitalized because it is the name of a person. Paragraphs are supposed to have five sentences in there but good job.
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